This is my favorite day,I think it's interesting.这句话当结尾好吗

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This is my favorite day,I think it's interesting.这句话当结尾好吗

This is my favorite day,I think it's interesting.这句话当结尾好吗
This is my favorite day,I think it's interesting.
这句话当结尾好吗

This is my favorite day,I think it's interesting.这句话当结尾好吗
意思是可以,但用词和语法上有问题.1.指示代词This应改用习惯用来指代时间的It,而且与后面的it一起,都表示所指代的是同一个名词(my favorite) day;2.后句之前必须用表示对比、意思为“(然)而”的连词while(去逗号);3.正式文章与前一致用it is(不用省略号');4.与前句平衡对比成the interesting one.
It is my favorite day while I think it is the interesting one.这是令我喜欢的一天,然而也是令我感兴趣的一天.