英语改错,改下下面的文章,有10处错误,要正确率高点的!谢勒!Senior high school stdents in ZheJiang province is doing the new course calling General Technology ,It aims to teach pupires basic skills and improve his designing abiliti

英语改错,改下下面的文章,有10处错误,要正确率高点的!谢勒!Senior high school stdents in ZheJiang province is doing the new course calling General Technology ,It aims to teach pupires basic skills and improve his designing abiliti
英语改错,改下下面的文章,有10处错误,要正确率高点的!谢勒!
Senior high school stdents in ZheJiang province is doing the new course calling General Technology ,It aims to teach pupires basic skills and improve his designing abilities.It requires students to use various types of common tods safty.Some basic skills.Such as repairing or washing clothing,are also included in tue lectures,More importantly they are expected to able to design and make on item that is useful in their lives .As it’s total different from those traditional course is very popular in stdents.They enjoy it mainly because of the course is closely related to everyday life.

英语改错,改下下面的文章,有10处错误,要正确率高点的!谢勒!Senior high school stdents in ZheJiang province is doing the new course calling General Technology ,It aims to teach pupires basic skills and improve his designing abiliti
Senior high school students in Zhejiang province are doing the new course called General Technology. It aims to teach pupils basic skills and improve their designing abilities. It requires students to use various types of common tods safety. Some basic skills, such as repairing or washing clothes, are also included in the lectures. More importantly they are expected to be able to design and make on item that is useful in their lives. As it’s total different from those traditional courses, it is very popular with students. They enjoy it mainly because the course is closely related to everyday life.

Senior high school students in ZheJiang province is（are） doing the new course calling(callde) General Technology ,It(which) aims to teach pupires basic skills and improve his（their） designing abilitie...

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Senior high school students in ZheJiang province is（are） doing the new course calling(callde) General Technology ,It(which) aims to teach pupires basic skills and improve his（their） designing abilities. It requires students to use various types of common tods safty.Some basic skills.Such（，such） as repairing or washing clothing, are also included in tue lectures,（.）More importantly they are expected to (be)able to design and make on item that is useful in their lives .As it’s total(totally) different from those traditional course(courses)(and) is very popular in(with) stdents.They enjoy it mainly because of(of 去掉) the course is closely related to everyday life.

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Senior high school stdents[students] in ZheJiang[Zhejiang] province is[ARE] doing the new course calling General Technology ,It[which] aims to teach pupire...

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错误的地方在方括号里面挑出来，你看看。
有个别标点不知道是不是你打错了。
Senior high school stdents[students] in ZheJiang[Zhejiang] province is[ARE] doing the new course calling General Technology ,It[which] aims to teach pupires basic skills and improve his[their] designing abilities. It requires students to use various types of common tods safty.Some basic skills.Such[,such] as repairing or washing clothing, are also included in tue[the] lectures,[.]More importantly[,] they are expected to [be] able to design and make on item that is useful in their lives .As it’s total[totally] different from those traditional courses [,it] is very popular in stdents.They enjoy it mainly because of the course is closely related to everyday life.

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