作业帮帮我修改这篇英语作文帮我看看我的这篇文章哪些地方有错误,语法错误什么都帮我改过来,或者有更好的写法也告诉我~weird dreamI had Two dreams yesterday.one is about my grandfather,the other one is about my gr
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帮我修改这篇英语作文帮我看看我的这篇文章哪些地方有错误,语法错误什么都帮我改过来,或者有更好的写法也告诉我~weird dreamI had Two dreams yesterday.one is about my grandfather,the other one is about my gr
帮我修改这篇英语作文
帮我看看我的这篇文章哪些地方有错误,语法错误什么都帮我改过来,或者有更好的写法也告诉我~
weird dream
I had Two dreams yesterday.
one is about my grandfather,the other one is about my grandmather.
I dreamed that my grandfather planed a war,and my whole family struggled in the war with a lot of bad people.though I didn't know why they were bad .
Then I found my father in a dark room,and someone hide there who was going to shoot him .I tried my best to remind my father that he was in danger,at the same time I get three kettles nearby ,in order to hit the bad man.
Fortunately it worked.
Finally we defeated them.
Then I dreamed that there has something happened on my grandmother.
so I must do something for her.such as making meals and washing clothes.
I felt a lot of love when I did anything for her,as she never want me to be tired .
I waked up in the morning ,felt sorry for them,and thought about what I can do for my grandparents in the real world.
帮我修改这篇英语作文帮我看看我的这篇文章哪些地方有错误,语法错误什么都帮我改过来,或者有更好的写法也告诉我~weird dreamI had Two dreams yesterday.one is about my grandfather,the other one is about my gr
很好啊,但是语句不通,分段不够好,写作文时要用心,反复修改不必要的不须写.
没有什么文章啊
很正确呀、