Nowadays,there is an increasingly hot debate about females joining the army.Some people assert that women should not join the army as they are not as strong as men.Indeed,womem have no advantages in physical side.However,as far as I am concerned,fema

Nowadays,there is an increasingly hot debate about females joining the army.Some people assert that women should not join the army as they are not as strong as men.Indeed,womem have no advantages in physical side.However,as far as I am concerned,fema
Nowadays,there is an increasingly hot debate about females joining the army.Some people assert that women should not join the army as they are not as strong as men.Indeed,womem have no advantages in physical side.However,as far as I am concerned,females should have the right to join the army for the following reasons.
To begin with,females are more careful and considerable.In the army,it is knowan that doctor is also indispensible.As a doctor,females are bound to take care of patients much more careful that the patients can have a better recovery.Moreover,the females have patience to code with the wounded soldiers”various problems.
Those who trend to accept the sugest that females should not join the armylay too much emphasis on the rights men.The ignore the rights of wowen.Females taking part in the army is not unreasonable.It is their choice and freedom.In addition,they can perform quite god and even more calm when face emergency.In china”s history,a number of females due to respect as a soldier,such as Hua Mu lan,Liu Hu lan.
Wo can not deny that men are more brave and strong.However,the females”effect can not be neglected.They can offer the wounded soldier a better care.The females:songs and dances before the warfare bring entertainment to soldiers and encourage the soldiers to faght with enemy bravely.And the females can also kill enemy and achieve victory.
Above all,I do not think females should not join the army.They play an irreplaceable role in the army.The army needs their patience ,chariness,and consideration.Futhermore,there is no evidences showing the direct link between females joining the army and the army”s powerful or not.

Nowadays,there is an increasingly hot debate about females joining the army.Some people assert that women should not join the army as they are not as strong as men.Indeed,womem have no advantages in physical side.However,as far as I am concerned,fema
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第一句话:There have been heated debates about whether women can join the army.
这个话题挺有意思的.很多外国人的观念是 All men (这里是指男人或女人) are created equal.Therefore,women should have the same right to fight for their country as men do.Even though women may be at disadvantage when it comes to physical strength,mentally women can handle stress as well as men do,if not better.
But I think nowadays there are fewer disputes about whether women can join the military.There are lots
of discussions,however,on whether women can be assigned to combat duties.