本人英语很烂尤其是作文 比着模板写了一篇 关于房价的We have witnessed that to buy a house is more and more difficult for most of Chinese ,especially in a big city.According to the Survey data ,the young people which have not eno

本人英语很烂尤其是作文 比着模板写了一篇 关于房价的We have witnessed that to buy a house is more and more difficult for most of Chinese ,especially in a big city.According to the Survey data ,the young people which have not eno
本人英语很烂尤其是作文 比着模板写了一篇 关于房价的
We have witnessed that to buy a house is more and more difficult for most of Chinese ,especially in a big city.According to the Survey data ,the young people which have not enough money to buy a house accounts for 80%.And the data shows that the people which have their own house bought by their parents accounts for 90 percent.Many reasons contribute to this phenomenon.
Among the various reasons State policies on real estate plays an important part.That is to say Government intervention in the market,greatly affected the price of house.What is more the quantity of young people which need to buy a house far exceeded the quantity of new house .For example when two couples want to buy new house but there is only one house left both of them want to buy it with a higher price.
When talking about my opinion about high price of house.I think our government should take some effective measures to decline the price of house .On the one hand government should build more house with lower price.On the other hand ,severe measures must be take to against those who raise the prices.

本人英语很烂尤其是作文 比着模板写了一篇 关于房价的We have witnessed that to buy a house is more and more difficult for most of Chinese ,especially in a big city.According to the Survey data ,the young people which have not eno
第一行,for most of Chinese ,把of 去掉
第二行,which have not 改为which don't have
第二段That is to say 换成 that means会更好
第二段最后一句,加上标点会好一点,再加一句
For example,when two couples want to buy new house but there is only one house left ,both of them want to buy it ,then the house will be sold with a higher price.
第三段第二行On the one hand,把the 去掉
倒数第二行must be take ,把take改为taken
别的地方还行吧,你再让别的高手给你看看

We have witnessed that to buy a house is becoming(用进行时好些) more and more difficult for most of Chinese , especially in a big city. According to the Survey data ,the young people who（先行词是人，关系代词用who） hav...

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We have witnessed that to buy a house is becoming(用进行时好些) more and more difficult for most of Chinese , especially in a big city. According to the Survey data ,the young people who（先行词是人，关系代词用who） have not enough money to buy a house accounts for 80%.And the data shows that the people who have their own houses(复数) bought by their parents accounts for 90 percent. Many reasons contribute to this phenomenon.
Among the various reasons，State policies on real estate plays an important part. That is to say， Government intervention in the market, greatly affected the prices of houses. What is more, the number(可数名词的总量) of young people who need to buy a house far exceeded the number of new houses .For example, when two couples want to buy a new house but there is only one house left.Both of them want to buy it at(价格的介词) a higher price.
When talking about my opinion about high price of house. I think our government should take some effective measures to decline the price of houses .On the one hand, government should build more house, at lower price. On the other hand , severe measures must be taken to go against those who raise the prices on purpose.

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