短文改错,You Said in your letter that you were always trying to improve your English ,and your...短文改错,You Said in your letter that you were always trying to improve your English ,and your English teacher didn't appear to appreciate your e

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You Said in your letter that you were always trying to improve your English ，and 【改为but】your English teacher didn't appear to appreciate your efforts .so you felt disappointing 【改为disappointed】 and lost the desire to learn English .you know why teachers are busy and maybe your teacher is 【改为was】 struggling to provide personal attention with 【改为to】 all the students in their 【改为his/her】 class.

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You said in your letter that you were always trying to improve your English，and your English teacher didn't appear to appreciate your efforts. So you felt disappointed and lost the desire to learn English. You know how teachers are busy and maybe your teacher is struggling to provide personal attention to all the students in their class

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disappointing改成disappointed
desire for learning
provide for

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You Said in your letter that you were always trying to improve your English ，( but ) your English teacher didn't appear to appreciate your efforts .so you felt ( disappointed ) and lost the desire to learn English .you know (the reason) why teachers are busy and maybe your teacher is struggling to provide personal attention with all the students in ( his ) class.

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disappointing改为disappointed
desire 改为desiring
why 后加 the

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You said in your letter that you were always trying to improve your English，and【but】 your English teacher didn't appear to appreciate your efforts .so you felt disappointing【disappointed】 and lost the desire to learn English .you know why【that】 teachers are busy and maybe your teacher is struggling to provide personal attention with【to】 all the students in their【your】 class.

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1.felt disappointed, ing 形式是令人怎样， ed 是自我感觉如何
2.provide sth. with sb or provide sth for sb, for 也可以换成to, 牛津词典有记录，但是不常用。
3.maybe your teacher 是单数就不能用 their
4.class 换成复数比较准确点。

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1.felt disappointed, ing 形式是令人怎样， ed 是自我感觉如何
2.provide sth. with sb or provide sth for sb, for 也可以换成to, 牛津词典有记录，但是不常用。
3.maybe your teacher 是单数就不能用 their
4.class 换成复数比较准确点。
最后一句话有点 Chinglish，汉语你到底想要表达什么意思？“you know why teachers are busy ” 这句话你想表达的是疑问语气，口语中完全没有问题。但是书面语体明显是一个肯定句,这样一来和 and 后面句子明显不搭。可以适当改成do you know why your teachers are busy?

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disappointing--disappointing

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