英语语法纠错yeah!帮我看看下文有什么错误哈now i already gonna make rap.for this things that I never drop.I knew I'm good at this ,so I won't give it up.niggas do it in america,but I'mma do it in china.this game need me shorties knews

英语语法纠错yeah!帮我看看下文有什么错误哈now i already gonna make rap.for this things that I never drop.I knew I'm good at this ,so I won't give it up.niggas do it in america,but I'mma do it in china.this game need me shorties knews
英语语法纠错
yeah!帮我看看下文有什么错误哈
now i already gonna make rap.
for this things that I never drop.
I knew I'm good at this ,so I won't give it up.
niggas do it in america,but I'mma do it in china.
this game need me
shorties knews I can do it big~
A baby leave me,and I through she's so stupid.
Cuz I'm the boy so special Is hard to find.
you may through me so sad but I feel so fine.
And you never know that I wait for the words that you said you'll leave me for a long time.
But I can't understand why these tears pop up in my eyes.
I told you I don't love you no more that's a lie.
Rember the days you stay with me Is the glorious time.
I love some loud music
only rap can drive me crazy.
But girl you never want me sing about it.
You even don't know what's the dream that I gonna be.
I told you I love you .
something pretty in front of me,but I ultimate choose of you .
You're apple of my eye.
And I really wanna you be my wife.
We been cry and laught get gether.
sometimes I even hold you hands in my hands in some cold weather.
sometimes you made me so mad but I didn't care.
sometimes I even think about to be a playa
But I can't do it,cuz this is not my style
You still in my mind
I can't understand,please tell me why?
I knew If I wanna forgot you and I need some times.
But I still dream about all the night
The memory even won't let off of me.
mother fucka soungs really funny.
I gotta tell you this hard feel never stop me!
I will keep movin'
Just for rap,for me and my homies.
So I gonna do it big
You should know I'm not do it only by myself
Many rappers wanna do it big at the first
I gotta show you guys who's the best.
every body already know!
I'm king back gonna rap for show.
If rap like UFO.
I'm the first gonna throw.

英语语法纠错yeah!帮我看看下文有什么错误哈now i already gonna make rap.for this things that I never drop.I knew I'm good at this ,so I won't give it up.niggas do it in america,but I'mma do it in china.this game need me shorties knews
now i already gonna make rap.
（gonna=going to,所以去掉already）
for this things that I never drop.
（如果”things”是指making rap的话,就改成for this is the thing that I never drop）
I knew I'm good at this ,so I won't give it up.
（Know,后边都用一般现在时和将来时了）
niggas do it in america,but I'mma do it in china.
（个人意见：别搞种族歧视呵!）
this game need me
（needs）
shorties knews I can do it big~
（know）
A baby leave me,and I through she's so stupid.
（Leave改为left；还有你是想说thought吧!）
Cuz I'm the boy so special Is hard to find.
（Cuz I'm the boy so special and so hard to find.）
you may through me so sad but I feel so fine.
（Through改为think）
And you never know that I wait for the words that you said you'll leave me for a long time.
（And you’ll never know that I’ve waited for your saying you’ll leave me for so long a time.）
But I can't understand why these tears pop up in my eyes.
I told you I don't love you no more that's a lie.
（More后面加个and吧）
Rember the days you stay with me Is the glorious time.
（stayed）
I love some loud music
only rap can drive me crazy.
But girl you never want me sing about it.
（wants）
You even don't know what's the dream that I gonna be.
（You even don't know what's the dream that I gonna achieve）

I told you I love you .
something pretty in front of me,but I ultimate choose of you .
（but my ultimate choice is you/ but I ultimately choose you）
You're apple of my eye.
And I really wanna you be my wife.
（And I really want you to be my wife.（wanna=want to,后边只能加动词））
We been cry and laught get gether.
( 这句没明白,we’d been crying and laughing together)
sometimes I even hold you hands in my hands in some cold weather.
Held your hands（用过去时吧）
sometimes you made me so mad but I didn't care.
sometimes I even think about to be a playa
(think about becoming a playa)
But I can't do it,cuz this is not my style
You still in my mind
（You’re still in my mind）
I can't understand,please tell me why?
I knew If I wanna forgot you and I need some times.
（去掉and）
But I still dream about all the night
（dream abt U all the night）
The memory even won't let off of me.
（一般是说let me off的,不过又要和下一句押韵,你自己看着办吧）
mother fucka soungs really funny.
（mother-fucking songs’ re really funny正解,形容词,）
I gotta tell you this hard feel never stop me!
（feeling, stops）
I will keep movin'
Just for rap, for me and my homies.
So I gonna do it big
You should know I'm not do it only by myself
（doing）
Many rappers wanna do it big at the first
（考虑到语法的保守建议：Many rappers wanna be the No.1）
I gotta show you guys who's the best.
（who’s the best/really one, 押韵吧~~）
every body already know!
（knew）
I'm king back gonna rap for show.
If rap like UFO.
I'm the first gonna throw.
（最后三行么看懂,就不给你乱改了.闪人~）